2006考研英语作文万能模式：针砭时弊型(3)

　　预测范文三 图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相，在天安门广场游玩时，在吐口香糖，乱扔废弃物，广场上充满了污渍 
　　As is vividly¹ depicted² in the picture, thougsands of tourists strolled on the Tiananmen Square,busily taking photos and enjoed themselves freely.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, those people threw away the chewed gum and the smoked cigarette . Recently the phenomenon that the tourists destroyed the environment seriously has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the environment should be condemned³ severely⁴ or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic⁵ meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.  

　　中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势 
　　To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, destroying the environment not only results in the loss of sanitary⁶ maintainance but also does harm to the indignity⁷ of our national images internationally since Tiananmen Square as the most high-profile site represents the face-lift of China . In addition, some unhealthy or even poisonous wates will cause the peole to breathe the harmful air ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling⁸ to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable⁹ results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters.  

　　最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法； 
　　From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the tourist damaging the environment. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the cultural relics¹⁰. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the relcs out of the evil hands of destructioin. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious¹¹ future better sooner or later. 

1 vividly   

adv.清楚地，鲜明地，生动地

参考例句：

• The speaker pictured the suffering of the poor vividly.演讲者很生动地描述了穷人的生活。
• The characters in the book are vividly presented.这本书里的人物写得栩栩如生。

2 depicted   

描绘，描画( depict的过去式和过去分词 )； 描述

参考例句：

• Other animals were depicted on the periphery of the group. 其他动物在群像的外围加以修饰。
• They depicted the thrilling situation to us in great detail. 他们向我们详细地描述了那激动人心的场面。

3 condemned   

adj. 被责难的, 被宣告有罪的 动词condemn的过去式和过去分词

参考例句：

• He condemned the hypocrisy of those politicians who do one thing and say another. 他谴责了那些说一套做一套的政客的虚伪。
• The policy has been condemned as a regressive step. 这项政策被认为是一种倒退而受到谴责。

4 severely   

adv.严格地；严厉地；非常恶劣地

参考例句：

• He was severely criticized and removed from his post.他受到了严厉的批评并且被撤了职。
• He is severely put down for his careless work.他因工作上的粗心大意而受到了严厉的批评。

5 symbolic   

adj.象征性的，符号的，象征主义的

参考例句：

• It is symbolic of the fighting spirit of modern womanhood.它象征着现代妇女的战斗精神。
• The Christian ceremony of baptism is a symbolic act.基督教的洗礼仪式是一种象征性的做法。

6 sanitary   

adj.卫生方面的，卫生的，清洁的，卫生的

参考例句：

• It's not sanitary to let flies come near food.让苍蝇接近食物是不卫生的。
• The sanitary conditions in this restaurant are abominable.这家饭馆的卫生状况糟透了。

7 indignity   

n.侮辱，伤害尊严，轻蔑

参考例句：

• For more than a year we have suffered the indignity.在一年多的时间里,我们丢尽了丑。
• She was subjected to indignity and humiliation.她受到侮辱和羞辱。

8 unwilling   

adj.不情愿的

参考例句：

• The natives were unwilling to be bent by colonial power.土著居民不愿受殖民势力的摆布。
• His tightfisted employer was unwilling to give him a raise.他那吝啬的雇主不肯给他加薪。

9 undesirable   

adj.不受欢迎的，不良的，不合意的，讨厌的；n.不受欢迎的人，不良分子

参考例句：

• They are the undesirable elements among the employees.他们是雇员中的不良分子。
• Certain chemicals can induce undesirable changes in the nervous system.有些化学物质能在神经系统中引起不良变化。

10 relics   

[pl.］n.遗物，遗迹，遗产；遗体，尸骸

参考例句：

• The area is a treasure house of archaeological relics. 这个地区是古文物遗迹的宝库。
• Xi'an is an ancient city full of treasures and saintly relics. 西安是一个有很多宝藏和神圣的遗物的古老城市。

11 harmonious   

adj.和睦的，调和的，和谐的，协调的

参考例句：

• Their harmonious relationship resulted in part from their similar goals.他们关系融洽的部分原因是他们有着相似的目标。
• The room was painted in harmonious colors.房间油漆得色彩调和。