高考英语写作的训练方法

 　　一, 高考英语书面表达基本策略:

　　仔细审题。 如果是看图写文，看懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。

　　写要点。据每幅图写出一至两句话。因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在10句话，120个词左右。

　　连句成文。每句话写好后，用适当的连词连接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。

　　查错漏。完稿后，检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正。

　　卷面整洁。卷面整洁干净甚至比准确，通顺，简介更重要。因为整洁干净给阅卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然要给得高一些。

　　为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候时刻牢记这些写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信，通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。

　　二, 高考英语书面表达高分策略：从遣词，造句，谋篇三个方面分析。

　　遣词的原则：使用高等级词汇及短语, 如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点,还远远没有达到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化 “复杂，高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。

　　平时学习过程中注意总结各种各样的词汇。以描述人物的词汇为例：

　　表达人物爱憎感情：

　　like, love, be interested in, be fond of…

　　hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in…

　　happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened…

　　介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价：

　　He became famous for his new theory.

　　The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.

　　We regard Li Fei as our model.

　　Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.

　　People spoke¹ highly² of him and all respected him.

　　常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语

　　good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent³ /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc.

　　造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。

　　英语基本句型及造句:

　　主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句)

　　The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.

　　We get up early every morning.

　　The meeting lasted 2 hours.

　　主语+不及物动词+副词

　　This kind of wine drinks well and sells well.

　　The suit wears well.

　　Glass breaks easily.

　　主语+谓语+介词+宾语

　　We all agreed on the terms.

　　He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters.

　　All these things are to be answered for.

　　主语+系动词+形容词

　　Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.

　　He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.

　　Your explanation sounds reasonable.

　　主语+谓语+直接宾语

　　I want your promise.

　　Have your fixed⁴ my watch?

　　This factory produces 1000 cars a week.

　　主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语

　　He paid me a visit yesterday.

　　He owed me 50 yuan.

　　He wrote his family a letter yesterday.

　　主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (to do)

　　I will get someone to repair the recorder for you.

　　I didn’t mean to hurt you.

　　He invited me to teach at a well-known university.

　　主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (do)

　　I often hear her sing the song.

　　The boss made workers work 15 hours a day.

　　Don’t forget to have him come.

　　主语+谓语+现在分词

　　I heard her singing in the next room.

　　We could feel our heats beating fast.

　　Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?

　　主语+谓语+过去分词

　　I must have my watch repaired.

　　We must get he task finished on time.

　　Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.

　　主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)

　　I suggested putting off the meeting.

　　They all avoided mentioning the matter.

　　We can’t help laughing at the news.

　　主语+谓语+宾语(不定式)

　　I can’t afford to buy such a large house.

　　Don’t pretend to know what you don’t.

　　He feared to speak in her presence⁵.

　　主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语

　　Nothing can prevent us from going forward.

　　Thank you for your help.

　　He demanded an answer from me.

　　练习写好句子的方法一：合并句子

　　It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.

　　Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.

　　A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide.

　　A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.

　　写好句子的方法二：改写句子

　　1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介词短语做伴随状语)

　　1) The book cost me 300 yuan.

　　Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.

　　2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用so…that…结构改写句子)

　　The ice on the lake is so thin that we can’t skate on it.

　　练习方法三：一句多译

　　这本书花了我300元。

　　I spent 300 yuan on the book.

　　I paid 300 yuan for the book.

　　The price of the book is 300 yuan.

　　It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.

　　我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。

　　I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.

　　I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.

　　I know no more English than Li Ming does.

　　I know as little English as Li Ming does.

　　一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。

　　On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen.

　　昨天下午他才来。

　　He came here yesterday afternoon.

　　He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.

　　Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.

　　It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.

　　It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.

　　谋篇的原则：

　　满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。

　　常见的句子之间的连接手段有：

　　使用代词指代上一句中的名词

　　重复使用上一句中的词

　　使用连接词

　　使用平行结构

　　高考大纲中常用的连接词:

　　表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover⁶, furthermore⁷, in addition,

　　表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite⁸ of, whereas⁹, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others,

　　表因果关系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that,

　　表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else,

　　表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime¹¹, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval¹², now, after, presently¹³, later, afterward¹⁰, somewhat¹⁴ later, finally, at last, all of a sudden,

　　表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly¹⁵, the , next, finally, in the end, at last,

　　表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way,

　　表进行举例说明: for instance¹⁶, for example, like, such as,

　　表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth

　　表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary.

1 spoke   

n.（车轮的）辐条；轮辐；破坏某人的计划；阻挠某人的行动 v.讲，谈（speak的过去式）；说；演说；从某种观点来说

参考例句：

• They sourced the spoke nuts from our company.他们的轮辐螺帽是从我们公司获得的。
• The spokes of a wheel are the bars that connect the outer ring to the centre.辐条是轮子上连接外圈与中心的条棒。

2 highly   

adv.高度地，极，非常；非常赞许地

参考例句：

• It is highly important to provide for the future.预先做好准备非常重要。
• The teacher speaks very highly of the boy's behaviour.老师称赞这个男孩的表现。

3 diligent   

adj.勤勉的，勤奋的

参考例句：

• He is the more diligent of the two boys.他是这两个男孩中较用功的一个。
• She is diligent and keeps herself busy all the time.她真勤快，一会儿也不闲着。

4 fixed   

adj.固定的，不变的，准备好的；(计算机)固定的

参考例句：

• Have you two fixed on a date for the wedding yet?你们俩选定婚期了吗？
• Once the aim is fixed,we should not change it arbitrarily.目标一旦确定，我们就不应该随意改变。

5 presence   

n.出席；到场；存在

参考例句：

• Her presence lent an air of respectability to the occasion.她的到场使那种场合增添了崇高的气氛。
• His presence is indicative of his willingness to help.他的出席表示他愿意帮忙。

6 moreover   

adv.再有，此外，而且

参考例句：

• The rent is reasonable, and moreover,the location is perfect.这房租合理，而且地点优越。
• The task is difficult, and moreover,time is pressing.任务艰巨，并且时间紧迫。

7 furthermore   

adv.而且，此外

参考例句：

• I don't like her because she is too tall and furthermore she smokes too much.我不喜欢她，因为她太高，另外她抽烟太厉害。
• I don't want to go there,furthermore,I have no time to do so.我不想去那里，而且我也没时间去。

8 spite   

n.（用于短语）虽然，不顾，尽管

参考例句：

• He has modern ideas in spite of his great age.尽管他年事很高，但思想观念却很入时。
• In spite of his anger,his remarks were restrained.他尽管生气，说的话还是有节制的。

9 whereas   

conj.而，却，反之

参考例句：

• They want a house,whereas we would rather live in a flat.他们想要一座房子，而我们宁愿住在一套房间里。
• Some praise him,whereas others condemn him.有些人赞扬他，而有些人谴责他。

10 afterward   

adv.后来；以后

参考例句：

• Let's go to the theatre first and eat afterward. 让我们先去看戏，然后吃饭。
• Afterward,the boy became a very famous artist.后来，这男孩成为一个很有名的艺术家。

11 meantime   

n.其时，其间；adv.同时，当时

参考例句：

• I continued working,meantime,he went out shopping.我继续工作，这期间他出去买东西。
• In the meantime we pressed on with the airlift.与此同时，我们加紧进行空运。

12 interval   

n.间隔，间距；幕间休息，中场休息

参考例句：

• The interval between the two trees measures 40 feet.这两棵树的间隔是40英尺。
• There was a long interval before he anwsered the telephone.隔了好久他才回了电话。

13 presently   

adv.不久，一会儿；现在，目前

参考例句：

• I'll go to see your uncle presently.我一会儿就去看望你叔叔。
• He is presently living in New York.他目前住在纽约。

14 somewhat   

pron.一些，某物；adv.多少，几分

参考例句：

• The cake we made was somewhat of a failure.我们做的蛋糕不大成功。
• The two office buildings are somewhat alike in appearance.这两座办公楼在外形上有点相似。

15 secondly   

adv.第二，其次

参考例句：

• Secondly,use your own head and present your point of view.第二，动脑筋提出自己的见解。
• Secondly it is necessary to define the applied load.其次，需要确定所作用的载荷。

16 instance   

n.例，例证，实例

参考例句：

• Can you quote me a recent instance?你能给我举一个最近的例子吗？
• He's a greedy boy,yesterday,for instance,he ate all our biscuits!他是个贪吃的孩子――比如，他昨天把我们的饼干都吃了！