I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to beijing!

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　　我听说丽江是一个非常美丽的城市，当我小的时候。我和我父母在假期了那里。我坐飞机去的。我看到有许多山当我下了飞机。空气很新鲜，我们去了谷城丽江的第一天，我们买了一些有趣的东西，在谷城丽江吃了一顿好饭。第二天，我们去了玉龙雪山山，它是美丽的，这是我第一次见到雪。我快乐地玩雪。我的父亲告诉我玉龙雪山是中国著名的地方，许多人每年都来这里。我在这次旅行中很开心，因为它甚至比北京更好!