2014年6月英语四级作文点评及范文

　　四级作文今年反押题趋势明显，一反常态没有考议论文，更没有出现漫画描述。对于考生的英语功力将会是一个非常大的挑战和考验，更能考察出学生的英语真实水平。说明广大考生在备考的过程中，不能一味背诵模板僵化思维，更应该广泛涉猎各种体裁，做好充足的准备才能以不变应万变。

　　对于2014年6月份外国友人来你的家乡，请给他推荐一个地方并说明原因的真题。写法趋向于说明文，介绍一个地点，其实并不难写，只是出乎意料，让大家措手不及。范文参考如下，另外两个题目外国友人来你的国家和你的校园，写法也可参照于此，把地点换掉即可。

　　If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue .When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly¹ summed up as below.

　　To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting². Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous³ city.

　　Harbin is a city full of vitality⁴ and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic⁵ northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!

1 briefly   

adv.简单地，简短地

参考例句：

• I want to touch briefly on another aspect of the problem.我想简单地谈一下这个问题的另一方面。
• He was kidnapped and briefly detained by a terrorist group.他被一个恐怖组织绑架并短暂拘禁。

2 tempting   

a.诱人的, 吸引人的

参考例句：

• It is tempting to idealize the past. 人都爱把过去的日子说得那么美好。
• It was a tempting offer. 这是个诱人的提议。

3 fabulous   

adj.极好的；极为巨大的；寓言中的，传说中的

参考例句：

• We had a fabulous time at the party.我们在晚会上玩得很痛快。
• This is a fabulous sum of money.这是一笔巨款。

4 vitality   

n.活力，生命力，效力

参考例句：

• He came back from his holiday bursting with vitality and good health.他度假归来之后，身强体壮，充满活力。
• He is an ambitious young man full of enthusiasm and vitality.他是个充满热情与活力的有远大抱负的青年。

5 authentic   

a.真的，真正的；可靠的，可信的，有根据的

参考例句：

• This is an authentic news report. We can depend on it. 这是篇可靠的新闻报道, 我们相信它。
• Autumn is also the authentic season of renewal. 秋天才是真正的除旧布新的季节。