英语六级写作突破讲义与笔记

     Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.

    Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

    1. 表示欢迎2. 提出过度假安排的建议3. 提醒应注意的事项A Letter to a SchoolmateJune 23,2001Dear Xiao WangDirections: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:

    A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

    假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

    January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President,Li Ming信内格式日期Date (Aug 5, 2003)称谓Solution (Dear Sir or Madam/To whom it may concern),Body部分顶格写，段落之间要空格。

    署名Sincerely Yours,Li Ming书信题写作五点基本结构开门见山说意图咨询建议一二三不同内容可分段感谢客气不可少期盼回信成老套（一）开 头 段：

    1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）Dear Sir/Mr. Prometheus,I was a student at your college, enrolled¹ in Philosophy Department.

    / I am a … at your …/ I am a … at your college, enrolled in the … course.

    / My name is …, I am ….

    2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear Prometheus,Hello/Hi. How are you? / I hope everything is fine. / How are things going with you?

    / How are you getting on in……?

    3、解释写信的原因（1）致谢：

    I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate² your favor when the opportunity arises.

    / I am greatly indebted to you for (the double) you have gone to on my behalf.

    / Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada.

    / I am writing to you to express my heartfelt gratitude³.

    / I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for…….

    / I would like to thank you most sincerely for…….

    （2）抱怨：

    I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room.

    / I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at …/ I wish to make a complaint about…….

    / I am writing to draw your attention to…….

    / I am afraid I have got a complaint about…….

    （3） 致歉：

    I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects.

    / I am writing to you because I am unable to…….

    / I am terribly sorry that…….

    / I would like to express my apologies for not being able to…….

    （4）询问：

    I would like to obtain/request/seek/inquire about some information about…/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor.

    / I would like some detailed⁴ information on/about……（二） 结 尾 段：

    1、发出请求（1） Please give this matter your immediate⁵ attention.

    （2）I would very much appreciate it if……as soon as possible.

    （3）Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive⁶ to my final decision.

    2、提供帮助（1）I hope these ……will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.

    （2）……will be taking over responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you.

    3、再次表示歉意或感激（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.

    （2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.

    （3）I am sorry that I cannot……, and trust that you will understand.

    （4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.

    （5）I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.

    （6）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.

    4、期盼回信（1）I look forward to your prompt response.

    （2）Looking forward to a prompt reply.

    （3）I expect to hear from you very soon.

    （4）I hope to receive your reply shortly.

    （5）I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.

    2001年6月真题范文：

    Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.

    Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

    1.表示欢迎2.提出过度假安排的建议3.提醒应注意的事项Dear Xiao Wang,Is it really true? Are you coming to visit me for the upcoming holiday? We have not seen each other for such a long time and I have missed you.

    Do you have any plans for what you would like to do? Since you are not familiar with where I live, I can make some recommendations. There are many scenic⁷ spots in the suburbs. When you first get here, we could plan a camping trip with some of my classmates. We can also visit the museums which are very interesting. And, we can go shopping! The shopping malls downtown are large and many have discount promotions⁸ during the holidays.

    What do you think of my recommendations? I should tell you that the weather here is much colder so you should bring a warm overcoat. Please also take care of your belonging during your travel here as there has been much theft reported.

    I am looking forward to your visit.

    My best wishes.

    Yours,Zhang Ying

1 enrolled   

adj.入学登记了的v.[亦作enrol]( enroll的过去式和过去分词 )；登记，招收，使入伍（或入会、入学等），参加，成为成员；记入名册；卷起，包起

参考例句：

• They have been studying hard from the moment they enrolled. 从入学时起，他们就一直努力学习。 来自《简明英汉词典》
• He enrolled with an employment agency for a teaching position. 他在职业介绍所登了记以谋求一个教师的职位。 来自《简明英汉词典》

2 reciprocate   

v.往复运动；互换；回报，酬答

参考例句：

• Although she did not reciprocate his feelings, she did not discourage him.尽管她没有回应他的感情，她也没有使他丧失信心。
• Some day I will reciprocate your kindness to me.总有一天我会报答你对我的恩德。

3 gratitude   

adj.感激，感谢

参考例句：

• I have expressed the depth of my gratitude to him.我向他表示了深切的谢意。
• She could not help her tears of gratitude rolling down her face.她感激的泪珠禁不住沿着面颊流了下来。

4 detailed   

adj.详细的，详尽的，极注意细节的，完全的

参考例句：

• He had made a detailed study of the terrain.他对地形作了缜密的研究。
• A detailed list of our publications is available on request.我们的出版物有一份详细的目录备索。

5 immediate   

adj.立即的；直接的，最接近的；紧靠的

参考例句：

• His immediate neighbours felt it their duty to call.他的近邻认为他们有责任去拜访。
• We declared ourselves for the immediate convocation of the meeting.我们主张立即召开这个会议。

6 conducive   

adj.有益的，有助的

参考例句：

• This is a more conducive atmosphere for studying.这样的氛围更有利于学习。
• Exercise is conducive to good health.体育锻炼有助于增强体质。

7 scenic   

adj.自然景色的，景色优美的

参考例句：

• The scenic beauty of the place entranced the visitors.这里的美丽风光把游客们迷住了。
• The scenic spot is on northwestern outskirts of Beijing.这个风景区位于北京的西北远郊。

8 promotions   

促进( promotion的名词复数 )； 提升； 推广； 宣传

参考例句：

• All services or promotions must have an appeal and wide application. 所有服务或促销工作都必须具有吸引力和广泛的适用性。
• He promptly directed the highest promotions and decorations for General MacArthur. 他授予麦克阿瑟将军以最高的官阶和勋奖。