2015大学英语六级作文范文:帮助他人

 　　Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Helping¹ Others in Need. You should write at least 120 words and base you composition in the outline below:

　　1. 现在，在看到他人遇到困难时，很少有人去伸出援手;

　　2. 这个现象产生的原因;

　　3. 我的看法。

　　参考范文：

　　My View on Helping Others in Need

　　In modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times.

　　Then what’s wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketinghousing prices, expensive medical expenditure² and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing³ by indifferently is their only choice.

　　However, is it necessary to be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment⁴. What’s more, the evaluation⁵ criteria⁶ for judging one individual’s success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time.

　　写作点评：

　　本题是写作中常见的现象分析及观点阐释性作文，正确运用表示原因、结果的句式，采用一定的论证方法，如举例、名言警句等，条理清晰、语义逻辑准确且鲜明的表达出个人的观点是该题夺取高分的保证。

1 helping   

n.食物的一份&adj.帮助人的，辅助的

参考例句：

• The poor children regularly pony up for a second helping of my hamburger. 那些可怜的孩子们总是要求我把我的汉堡包再给他们一份。
• By doing this, they may at times be helping to restore competition. 这样一来, 他在某些时候,有助于竞争的加强。

2 expenditure   

n.(时间、劳力、金钱等)支出；使用，消耗

参考例句：

• The entry of all expenditure is necessary.有必要把一切开支入账。
• The monthly expenditure of our family is four hundred dollars altogether.我们一家的开销每月共计四百元。

3 standing   

n.持续，地位；adj.永久的，不动的，直立的，不流动的

参考例句：

• After the earthquake only a few houses were left standing.地震过后只有几幢房屋还立着。
• They're standing out against any change in the law.他们坚决反对对法律做任何修改。

4 accomplishment   

n.完成，成就，（pl.）造诣，技能

参考例句：

• The series of paintings is quite an accomplishment.这一系列的绘画真是了不起的成就。
• Money will be crucial to the accomplishment of our objectives.要实现我们的目标，钱是至关重要的。

5 evaluation   

n.估价，评价；赋值

参考例句：

• I attempted an honest evaluation of my own life.我试图如实地评价我自己的一生。
• The new scheme is still under evaluation.新方案还在评估阶段。

6 criteria   

n.标准

参考例句：

• The main criterion is value for money.主要的标准是钱要用得划算。
• There are strict criteria for inclusion in the competition.参赛的标准很严格。