大学四六级写作作文评分标准

大学四六级写作作文评分标准

　　2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

　　5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

　　8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

　　11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。?

　　14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)

　　常见写作错误

　　一、主语错误

　　1. 主语缺失

　　1) In our country feels very free.

　　People feel free in our country.

　　2) In my hometown aren’t very busy.

　　People in my hometown are very busy.

　　2. 非名词主语

　　1) Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　2) Keep two full-time¹ jobs is simply impossible.

　　Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

　　3. 主谓错位

　　1) Reading books can acquire² knowledge.

　　People can acquire knowledge from books.

　　2) Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.

　　Now people can’t do without TV.

　　二、谓语错误

　　1. 多重谓语

　　1) In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.

　　In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim³ to various tricks.

　　2) Poverty⁴ makes many people can’t study abroad.

　　Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

　　2. 非动词谓语

　　1) Some people firmly agree, but others against it.

　　Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.

　　2) It is said that the place worths touring.

　　It is said that the place is worth touring.

　　3. 主谓不一致

　　1) I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.

　　I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

　　2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.

　　I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

4. 误用词组

　　1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　2) I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.

　　I am afraid that it’s going to rain.

　　三、冠词错误

　　1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising⁵.

　　In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.

　　2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.

　　They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.

　　四、代词错误

　　1. 偷梁换柱

　　1) An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize⁶.

　　An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.

　　2) If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

　　If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

　　2. 指代不明

　　1) He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

　　He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

　　2) Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden⁷ they have to bear.

　　Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.

　　五、形容词、副词错误

　　1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.

　　What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.

　　2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

　　Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

　　六、分词误用

　　1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable⁸ part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.

　　Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

　　七、修饰语误置

　　1) Spoken English is an important part for learning⁹ English people.

　　Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

　　2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

八、垂悬修饰语

　　1) Having carried out economic reforms¹⁰ in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.

　　Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

　　2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

　　To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

　　九、平行错误

　　1) While we reduce the number of vehicles¹¹, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

　　2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned¹² me of the difficulty¹³ of the course and how long it lasted.

　　Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

　　十、搭配错误

　　1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers¹⁴.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners¹⁵. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.

1 full-time   

adj.满工作日的或工作周的，全时间的

参考例句：

• A full-time job may be too much for her.全天工作她恐怕吃不消。
• I don't know how she copes with looking after her family and doing a full-time job.既要照顾家庭又要全天工作，我不知道她是如何对付的。

2 acquire   

vt.获得，取得；学到

参考例句：

• We should try to acquire good habits.我们应该努力养成良好的习惯。
• We must work hard to acquire a good knowledge of English.我们必须用功学习才能精通英语。

3 victim   

n.受害人，牺牲者，牺牲品

参考例句：

• What is your relationship with the victim?您与受害人的关系？
• The victim was found lying dead on the river bank.发现被害人倒毙于河岸。

4 poverty   

n.贫穷， 贫困， 贫乏， 缺少

参考例句：

• We must continue to war against poverty and disease.我们一定要继续同贫穷和疾病作斗争。
• He showed his poverty in his knowledge of agriculture.他表现出缺乏对农业知识的了解。

5 promising   

adj.有希望的，有前途的

参考例句：

• The results of the experiments are very promising.实验的结果充满了希望。
• We're trying to bring along one or two promising young swimmers.我们正设法培养出一两名有前途的年轻游泳选手。

6 plagiarize   

v.剽窃，抄袭（别人学说、著作）

参考例句：

• Never plagiarize your paper.课程论文千万不要抄袭。
• It's not a viable option to plagiarize someone else's work.剽窃他人作品的行为是不可取的。

7 burden   

n.负担，重载，担子，责任；vt.装货于，麻烦，使负担

参考例句：

• The burden fell on the eldest son.担子落在了长子身上。
• Too much praise is a burden.太多的赞扬是一种负担。

8 indispensable   

adj.必不可少的，绝对必要的

参考例句：

• He is indispensable to our work,we cannot do it without him.对于我们的工作来说，他是不可缺少的，没有他我们就做不了。
• This is an indispensable part of his creed.这是他的信条中必不可少的一部分。

9 learning   

n.学问，学识，学习；动词learn的现在分词

参考例句：

• When you are learning to ride a bicycle,you often fall off.初学骑自行车时，常会从车上掉下来。
• Learning languages isn't just a matter of remembering words.学习语言不仅仅是记些单词的事。

10 reforms   

改革，改良，改造( reform的名词复数 )

参考例句：

• These reforms are not merely cosmetic. 这些改革不仅仅是装点门面的。
• The reforms marked the successful culmination of a long campaign. 这些改革标志着一场长期运动的胜利结束。

11 vehicles   

n.运载工具；传播媒介；（为展露演员才华而）特意编写的一出戏（或电影等）；[画]展色剂；交通工具( vehicle的名词复数 )；车辆；传播媒介；手段

参考例句：

• There is not much clearance for vehicles passing under this bridge. 车辆在这座桥下通过时没有多少余隙。
• to carry out random spot checks on vehicles 对车辆进行抽检

12 warned   

v.警告( warn的过去式和过去分词 )；提醒；告诫；预先通知

参考例句：

• Motorists have been warned to beware of icy roads. 已经提醒开车的人当心冰封的路面。
• I've warned her countless times. 我警告过她无数次了。

13 difficulty   

n.困难，费劲；难事，难题；麻烦，困境

参考例句：

• If there is any difficulty,please let us know promptly.倘有困难，请迅速通知我们。
• A little difficulty like this is nothing to us.这点困难算不了什么。

14 dwellers   

n.居民，居住者( dweller的名词复数 )

参考例句：

• City dwellers think country folk have provincial attitudes. 城里人以为乡下人思想迂腐。 来自《简明英汉词典》
• They have transformed themselves into permanent city dwellers. 他们已成为永久的城市居民。 来自《简明英汉词典》

15 manners   

n.礼貌；规矩

参考例句：

• You should mend your manners.你的态度应当纠正。
• His manners are rough,but he is a kind man at heart.他虽然举止粗鲁，但心地善良。