09年12月四级作文预测及范文（10）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least

120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:　
　　1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行
　　2)两种旅行方式的好处
　　3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?
　　Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选

择型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢

于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。
　　高分范文
　　Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
　　[1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel

with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.
　　[4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring¹ others. [3]Moreover,

traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with

traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey.

[3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.
　　[9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like

to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find

the pleasure from either one.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。
　　[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。
    [3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。
　　[5]“倾向，趋于”。
　　[6]“意外的惊喜”。
　　[7]表示列举。
　　[8]“和…相比”。
　　[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。
　　[10]“或者…，或者”。 

1 humoring   

v.迎合，牵就，顺应( humor的现在分词 )

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