09年12月六级作文预测及范文（02）

09年12月六级作文预测及范文（02）

(二)Enhance Awareness¹ to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生

　　2. 物品被盗的原因

　　3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

　　●审题概述●?

　　这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情
况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】

　　l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better
put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts
have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it
seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely
from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even
underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime² is likely to be stolen。

　　What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I
believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important.
For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open
during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave
their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their
personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts
undoubtedly³ have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters。

　　In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first
place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more
specific, the students should not hide any tempting⁴ amount of cash in the dorm. Put it
in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them
wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch
programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms。

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

　　◇语言点提示：

　　it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　说明被盗原因

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

　　(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

　　(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

　　(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　阐述如何加强防盗意识

　　◇语言点提示：

　　注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

       预祝大家取得好成绩！

1 awareness   

n.意识，觉悟，懂事，明智

参考例句：

• There is a general awareness that smoking is harmful.人们普遍认识到吸烟有害健康。
• Environmental awareness has increased over the years.这些年来人们的环境意识增强了。

2 dime   

n.（指美国、加拿大的钱币）一角

参考例句：

• A dime is a tenth of a dollar.一角银币是十分之一美元。
• The liberty torch is on the back of the dime.自由火炬在一角硬币的反面。

3 undoubtedly   

adv.确实地，无疑地

参考例句：

• It is undoubtedly she who has said that.这话明明是她说的。
• He is undoubtedly the pride of China.毫无疑问他是中国的骄傲。

4 tempting   

a.诱人的, 吸引人的

参考例句：

• It is tempting to idealize the past. 人都爱把过去的日子说得那么美好。
• It was a tempting offer. 这是个诱人的提议。