09年12月六级作文预测及范文（13）

09年12月六级作文预测及范文（13）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic Cyber Crimes. You should write at least 150 words, and base yourcomposition on
the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前

　　2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题

　　3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提
纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。　　

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯
罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

　　【参考范文】

　　Cyber Crimes

　　With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem
facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To
illustrate¹, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords
or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash² viruses to crash computers. As a
result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer
great losses。

　　However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time
for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should
reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly³. Moreover, we should
develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent
cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective
firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

　　As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber
crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.
For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread
unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

  预祝大家在这次四六级考试中取得好成绩！

1 illustrate   

v.举例说明，阐明；图解，加插图

参考例句：

• The company's bank statements illustrate its success.这家公司的银行报表说明了它的成功。
• This diagram will illustrate what I mean.这个图表可说明我的意思。

2 unleash   

vt.发泄，发出；解带子放开

参考例句：

• They hope to create allies to unleash against diseases,pests,and invasive species.他们希望创造出一些新群体来对付疾病、害虫和一些有侵害性的物种。
• Changing water levels now at times unleash a miasma of disease from exposed sewage.如今，大坝不时地改变水位，从暴露的污水释放出了疾病瘴气。

3 strictly   

adv.严厉地，严格地；严密地

参考例句：

• His doctor is dieting him strictly.他的医生严格规定他的饮食。
• The guests were seated strictly in order of precedence.客人严格按照地位高低就座。