09年12月六级作文预测及范文（16）

09年12月六级作文预测及范文（16）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic Self?help Traveling of College Students. You should write at least 150 words,
and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”

　　2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因

　　3)你的看法

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因
，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热衷于“自助游
”的现象；分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因；阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。

　　【参考范文】

　　Self-help Traveling of College Students

　　So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel
route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and
team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity¹
among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer
self-help traveling to following a tour group。

　　Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help
traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being
restricted². They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover³, self-help
traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability⁴ and
viability⁵. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers
themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for
their disposal⁶。

　　As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited
a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those
travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn
how to deal with people better。

预祝大家在这次四六级考试中取得好成绩！

1 popularity   

n.普及，流行，名望，受欢迎

参考例句：

• The story had an extensive popularity among American readers.这本小说在美国读者中赢得广泛的声望。
• Our product enjoys popularity throughout the world.我们的产品饮誉全球。

2 restricted   

adj.有限的；受约束的

参考例句：

• Speed is restricted to 30 mph in towns. 在城里车速不得超过每小时30英里。
• a restricted range of foods 有限的食物种类

3 moreover   

adv.再有，此外，而且

参考例句：

• The rent is reasonable, and moreover,the location is perfect.这房租合理，而且地点优越。
• The task is difficult, and moreover,time is pressing.任务艰巨，并且时间紧迫。

4 adaptability   

n.适应性

参考例句：

• It has a wide range of adaptability.它的应用性广。

5 viability   

n.存活(能力)

参考例句：

• What is required to achieve or maintain such viability? 要达到或维持这种生存能力需要什么？
• Scientists are experimenting to find ways to ensure the viability of seeds for even longer periods of time. 正如我们所说，科学家正在试验努力寻找让种子的生命力更加延长的方法。

6 disposal   

n.处理，消除，销毁，处置；弃菜碾碎器

参考例句：

• The safe disposal of nuclear waste is a major problem.安全处置核废料是个大问题。
• You had better discuss with her the disposal of the furniture.你最好和她讨论一下如何布置家具。