09年12月六级作文预测及范文（27）

09年12月六级作文预测及范文（27）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic My View on College Student’s cohabitation. You should write at least 150 words,
and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)现在社会上的未婚同居现象相当普遍，大学生中也存在这种现象

　　2)分析大学生同居的利与弊

　　3)你怎样看待大学生同居现象？为什么？

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象的利与弊，提
纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生中的未婚同居现象，引出对其的争议；对比
分析大学生同居的利与弊；表明“我”对大学生未婚同居现象的立场并说明理由。

　　【参考范文】

　　My View on College Students’ Cohabitation

　　Nowadays, premarital cohabitation is common and popular and this phenomenon has
extended to the campus. More and more college student lovers choose to live together
off campus. This phenomenon has aroused great public concern and there are much
discussion on its advantages and disadvantages。

　　Admittedly, college students’ cohabitation has its advantages. One of them is
that the lovers can know each other better by living together. They can decide whether
their romantic relationship should go on. Secondly¹, cohabitation matures college
students and improves their sense of responsibility. However, there are also many
problems resulting from the cohabitation on campus. A good example to illustrate² this
point is that some girls might be hurt by their irresponsible boyfriends. Besides,
living together will involve many trivial things, which of course will influence their
study。

　　From my point of view, it is unwise for college student lovers to live together
during their education. After all, premarital cohabitation is not an easy thing, which
is too early for college students who are not mature enough. Therefore, I suggest that
the college students should take love seriously and do not choose to live together
before graduation.

预祝大家在这次四六级考试中取得好成绩！

1 secondly   

adv.第二，其次

参考例句：

• Secondly,use your own head and present your point of view.第二，动脑筋提出自己的见解。
• Secondly it is necessary to define the applied load.其次，需要确定所作用的载荷。

2 illustrate   

v.举例说明，阐明；图解，加插图

参考例句：

• The company's bank statements illustrate its success.这家公司的银行报表说明了它的成功。
• This diagram will illustrate what I mean.这个图表可说明我的意思。