The progress I have made surprises me

　　2.This makes me conclude that money doesn’t mean everything

　　This leads me to the conclusion that money doesn’t mean everything.

　　3.Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.

　　Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes

　　4.College students now are primarily interested in grades and economic success. They are expected to cheat on exams more frequently. This is not like those who graduated 10 years ago. They are only concerned with their own personal future. They consider little problems of society. All these are reported by a recent study.

　　A recent study reports that college students now are primarily interested in grades and economic success, that they are expected to cheat on exams more frequently than those who graduated 10 years ago, and that they are more concerned with their own personal future than with problems of society.

　　5.Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China

　　It is widely thought that birth control is quite necessary in China

　　6.More and more people agree that women should enjoy full equality with men

　　There is a growing agreement that women should enjoy full equality with men

　　7.Many Chinese people have gone to the United States in the past 15 years

　　The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States

　　8.We almost forget this event

　　This event is now almost fading from our memory

　　9.Students should certainly make continuous efforts

　　Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainly required

　　10. we easily drew the conclusion through the investigation.

　　The investigation easily led us to the conclusion

　　11.We are making great efforts to improve our English

　　Great efforts are being made to improve our English

　　12.We know very little about the nature of human beings.

　　Little is known about the nature of human being

　　13.Because of social demands, there appear many evening schools.

　　Many evening schools are called into existence by social demands

　　14.We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children.

　　More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children

　　15.If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars

　　Careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority of the former over the latter

　　16.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.

　　The application of book knowledge alone won’t bring you good results

　　17.If we can better understand the greater pressure of population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning.

　　A better understanding of the greater pressure of population growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning.

　　18.When a woman sees that she is going to be laid off, she begins to worry all day and night.

　　The mere prospect of lay-off would set a woman to worry all day and night

　　19.When our teacher had left, the heated discussion then ended

　　The departure of our teacher brought the heated discussion to an end

　　20.Because the decision recognizes the rights of students, so they all welcome it.

　　Students all welcome the decision which recognizes their rights

　　21.The style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people

　　The style of living has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people

　　22.It is time for us to revise educational system and then provide it to our society

　　It is time for us to provide our society a revised educational system

　　23.If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability will be seriously affected.

　　Heavy exposure to TV will exert an negative effect on our reading ability

　　24.If we don’t recognize the serious problem of growing populations, we will make a big mistake.

　　Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big mastake

　　25.Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost

　　There is hardly a young boy and girl who doesn’t want to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost

　　26.Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisements.

　　It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without finding advertisement

　　27.Gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story is the best pastimes to bring a family closer together.

　　Few pastimes bring a family closer together than gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story

　　28.Food is the most basic issue to individual and national survival

　　No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food

　　29.I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.

　　I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the rights to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to equal they have never been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics

　　Never before in history have Chinese citizens held such power in their own hands. Never before in history have they been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics

　　最后检查时态错误

　　1.We college students had enough time to take a part-time job, no matter how busy we were

　　We college students have enough time to take a part-time joopportunities for promotion

　　2.There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international language

　　There are so many countries using English that it has been regarded as an international language

　　主谓一致，代词和人称没有保持一致

　　3.The eating habit of Chinese people have changed in the past decade.

　　The eating habit of Chinese people has changed in the pastt decade

　　4.Now fruits and vegetables can been seen everywhere when it is in season.

　　Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season

　　5.I feel proud to come to our university.

　　I feel proud to come to this university

　　修饰语没有放在正确的位置上

　　6.Without television, people can’t get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately

　　Without television, people can’t immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world

　　7.At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.

　　When I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons.

　　8.To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is necessary.

　　To improve one’s writing skill, one must make regular practice.

　　表示相同的意思没有用平行的语法结构

　　9.With the computer, one can do shopping, banking and read at home

　　With the computer, one can do shopping, banking and readig at home

　　10.Nowadays, people not only eat enough food, but also eat better.

　　Nowadays, people not only eat more, but also eat better

　　11. Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train our character

　　Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and it is also beneficial to our character-training

　　代词指代不明

　　12.Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　Sometimes a teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　13.Someone believes that the teacher’s task is to give students’ knowledge, which may not be true.

　　Someone believes that the teacher’s task is give students knowledge, a notion which may not be true

　　14.People have been fighting against the influence of Tv commercials, but it often proves useless

　　People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but the effort often prove useless.

　　相邻的句子用了没有必要的结构转换

　　15.While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic is increased

　　16.TV presents us with many useful informations.

　　TV presents us with a lot of useful information

　　17.Making our cities greener is not an easy work

　　Making our cities greener is not an easy job

　　18.Each people has his own opportunities

　　Each person has his own opportunities.

　　19.Book knowledge is important, but we should also learn something in the society

　　Book knowledge is important, but we should also learn something in the society

　　20.If there were no electric power, we would have to do everything by the hands.

　　If there were no electric power, factory would stop producing goods, car, bus and train would stop running

　　主谓宾不齐全

　　21.There are many ways to contact with society. For example, join in clubs, taking parttime jobs and helping the poor.

　　There are many ways to contact with society, for example, joining clubs, taking parttime jobs and helping the poor

　　22.If no electricity, all activities such as watching TV and seeing movies will be impossible

　　If there is no electricity, all activities such as watching TV and seeing movies will be impossible.

　　过度词使用不当

　　23.Because some college graduates could not find a better job, so they decided to continue to read for a second degree.

　　As some college graduates could not find a better job, they decided to continue to read for a second degree.

　　24.Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.

　　Although an opportunity is rare, we must be ready to seize it.

　　词语搭配是否合适

　　25. We students should learn/study as much knowledge as possible

　　We students should acquire as much knowledge as possible

　　26.With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become more and more crowded.

　　With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become increasingly heavier.

　　27.People begin to eat more vice food.

　　People begin to eat more non—staple foodstuff.

　　词语使用不当

　　28.Actually, traffic jams have effected our daily life.

　　Actually, traffic jams have affected our daily life.

　　29.When old problems are solved, new problems will rise.

　　When old problems are solved, new problems will arise.

　　30.There are many factors leading to changes in people’s diet.

　　At first, people can afford expensive food.

　　There are many factors leading to changes in people’s diet.

　　First, people can afford expensive food.

　　是否使用表示相同意思的词

　　31. In my opinion, I believe the present educational system is in need of reform

　　In my opinion, the present educational system is in need of reform.

　　32. The reason why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution nor noise there

　　The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution nor noise there

　　33. People try to find a solution to solve the problem.

　　People try to find a solution to the problem

　　介词使用不正确

　　34.After four years, we all graduated from college and entered society.

　　Four years later, we all graduated from college and entered society

　　35.Many college students have a strong desire to be independent on their parents.

　　Many college students have a strong desire to be independent of their parents

　　词性使用不正确

　　36.The computer like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

　　Like TV, the computer has both advantages and disadvantages

　　37.Riding bicycles conveniences my work.

　　Riding bicycles is convenient to my work

　　句子没有明确主语

　　38.Unlike the movie, TV shows on continuously, and doesn’t need to pay an extra money.

　　Unlike the movie, TV shows on continuously, and one doesn’t need to pay an extra money

　　39. Too easy or too difficult is no good for us.

　　The book which are too easy or too difficult are no good for us.

　　40.Reading books can acquire knowledge.

　　Through reading one can acquire knowledge

　　句子不止有一个谓语、

　　41. People think go to the movie will cost a lot of money.

　　People think that going to the movie will cost them a lot of money

　　42. There are many people take part in sports and games now.

　　Many people take part in sports and games now.

　　43. Although difficulty is exist, but we can overcome it.

　　Although difficulty does exist, we can overcome it.