托福写作不能犯的错误（2）

 　　13.标点问题　I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want　to become a vet¹.　这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

　　14.重复冗余　Personally,　I believe what the newspaper prints. 一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。

　　15.单数/复数　Many year ago, dinosaur² roamed³ the Earths.　单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。　单数可数名词　单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a,　the, my, his, her, Gary"s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

　　16.拼写错误,主语、动词或宾语有问题　I want to buy something for my mother that she will　like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.　句子的基本结构有问题, 缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。

　　17.语气与文章不符　I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have　heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan⁴ cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong　Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.　语气与文章其他部分不相符, 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。

　　18.代词指代不明　If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of　miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have　good programs there. 代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。

　　19.过于笼统　We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.　句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。

　　20.动词时态错误　Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.　动词时态不正确　检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。

　　21.选词不恰当　I was late getting home because I lost my way.　在这种情况下不应该使用该词　可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。

　　22.单词形式不当　I want to creation⁵ a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.　所使用的单词的形式不正确　检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。

　　23.用词错误　Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department　store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.　用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。

1 vet   

n.兽医，退役军人；vt.检查

参考例句：

• I took my dog to the vet.我把狗带到兽医诊所看病。
• Someone should vet this report before it goes out.这篇报道发表之前应该有人对它进行详查。

2 dinosaur   

n.恐龙

参考例句：

• Are you trying to tell me that David was attacked by a dinosaur?你是想要告诉我大卫被一支恐龙所攻击？
• He stared at the faithful miniature of the dinosaur.他凝视著精确的恐龙缩小模型。

3 roamed   

随便走( roam的过去式和过去分词 )； 漫步； 眼睛或手 （缓慢地）扫遍； 摸遍

参考例句：

• The lovers roamed around the fields in complete forgetfulness of time. 这对情侣漫步于田野，完全忘记了时间。
• They roamed about in the park. 他们在公园里漫步。

4 cosmopolitan   

adj.世界性的，全世界的，四海为家的，全球的

参考例句：

• New York is a highly cosmopolitan city.纽约是一个高度世界性的城市。
• She has a very cosmopolitan outlook on life.她有四海一家的人生观。

5 creation   

n.创造，创造的作品，产物，宇宙，天地万物

参考例句：

• Language is the most important mental creation of man.语言是人类头脑最重要的产物。
• The creation of new playgrounds will benefit the local children.新游戏场的建立将有益于当地的儿童。