2015年中考优秀作文赏析：学做好人好事

 　　学做好人好事

　　今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”

　　请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。

　　在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。

　　★ 范文

　　Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted¹ all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.

　　Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.

　　To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.

　　I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.

1 devoted   

adj.忠诚的，忠实的，热心的，献身于...的

参考例句：

• He devoted his life to the educational cause of the motherland.他为祖国的教育事业贡献了一生。
• We devoted a lengthy and full discussion to this topic.我们对这个题目进行了长时间的充分讨论。