09年12月四级作文预测及范文（08）

　09年12月四级作文预测及范文（08）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your

composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒，幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒

与脱险的过程，并呼吁要加强食品安全。
　　A Food Poisoning Accident
行文思路
　　本题属于情景式命题。提纲要求描述一件事情的经过，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待食物中毒的背景和原因;叙述中毒的和脱险的经过;

谈谈由此引发的感想，呼吁加强食品安全。
　　高分范文
　　A Food Poisoning Accident
　　Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my

classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though

finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.
　　That day was Julie’s birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it,

her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They

shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal¹ pain,

nausea² and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]

rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had

expired its guarantee period. Futunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all

recovered very soon.
　　[4]However, this accident [8]leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to

take effective measures to improve food safety. [4]Firstly, the government should [9]

strengthen supervision³ and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to

those who immoral⁴ businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we

consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure

that no same accident happens.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]“目睹，目击”。
　　[2]“发生在某人身上”，现在分词短语作定语。
　　[3]“仍然令我记忆犹新”。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]“闻讯赶来”。
　　[6]“结果是，原来是”。
　　[7]“由于及时的治疗”。
　　[8]“留给我深深的思考”。
　　[9]“加强监管”。
　　[10]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。

1 abdominal   

adj.腹（部）的，下腹的；n.腹肌

参考例句：

• The abdominal aorta is normally smaller than the thoracic aorta.腹主动脉一般比胸主动脉小。
• Abdominal tissues sometimes adhere after an operation.手术之后腹部有时会出现粘连。

2 nausea   

n.作呕，恶心；极端的憎恶(或厌恶)

参考例句：

• Early pregnancy is often accompanied by nausea.怀孕期常有恶心的现象。
• He experienced nausea after eating octopus.吃了章鱼后他感到恶心。

3 supervision   

n.监督，管理

参考例句：

• The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
• The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。

4 immoral   

adj.不道德的，淫荡的，荒淫的，有伤风化的

参考例句：

• She was questioned about his immoral conduct toward her.她被询问过有关他对她的不道德行为的情况。
• It is my belief that nuclear weapons are immoral.我相信使核武器是不邪恶的。