09年12月四级作文预测及范文（07）

09年12月四级作文预测及范文（07）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

topic Parental¹ Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)父母都会望子成龙，但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾
　　2)分析这种矛盾产生的原因
　　3)应该如何解决这一矛盾
　　Parental Hopes and Personal Ideal
行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的原因

，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之间的矛盾;分析这种矛

盾产生的主要原因;说明解决这一矛盾的办法。
　　高分范文
　　Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals
　　All parents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents’

expectations for their children are not always [1]in accordance with their children’s

personal ideals, [2]and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is

often a main cause for quarrels and gaps between parents and children. [3]But what

lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?
　　[3]The following three factors contribute to the conflict. [4]First of all, in

this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind.

[4]Secondly, traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents in modern

society. They are used to making decisions for their children. [4]Third, nowadays

young people have strong independence, [5]who want to plan their own future and

control their own destiny². [4]Thus the conflict between parents and children

inevitably³ appear.
　　[6]In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their

efforts. [4]For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own

decisions. They may help their children make choices [7]instead of replacing them to

make choices. [4]For another, children should learn to respect their parents’ advices

[8]since parents tend to have more life experience. [4]Besides, to communicate with

each other actively⁴ is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both

parents and children learn to think [9]from the other side’s point of view, the

conflicts between them can be avoided.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]“和…一致”。
　　[2]表示递进。
　　[3]通过转折和设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]who引导非限制性定语从句。
　　[6]“为了”，表示目的，常用于句首。
　　[7]“代替，而不是”。
　　[8]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。
　　[9]“从对方的角度”。

 

1 parental   

adj.父母的；父的；母的

参考例句：

• He encourages parental involvement in the running of school.他鼓励学生家长参与学校的管理。
• Children always revolt against parental disciplines.孩子们总是反抗父母的管束。

2 destiny   

n.命运，定数，天命

参考例句：

• Nobody knows his own destiny.没有人知道自己的命运。
• It was her destiny to become famous.她命里注定出名。

3 inevitably   

adv.不可避免地；必然发生地

参考例句：

• In the way you go on,you are inevitably coming apart.照你们这样下去，毫无疑问是会散伙的。
• Technological changes will inevitably lead to unemployment.技术变革必然会导致失业。

4 actively   

adv.积极地，勤奋地

参考例句：

• During this period all the students were actively participating.在这节课中所有的学生都积极参加。
• We are actively intervening to settle a quarrel.我们正在积极调解争执。