09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）

09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline¹ (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动
　　2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处
　　3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么
　　Social Practice of College Students 
范文思路：
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处

，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践

活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些什么。
　　高分范文
　　Social Practice of College Students
　　Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social

practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the

volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical² activities alike³. It

’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s

college education.
　　[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice.

[4]Above all, they are provided⁴ with more opportunities to contact the real world

outside the campus⁵. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply

their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills

are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense

of social responsibility⁶.
　　[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students

to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some

problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so

as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship

between social practice and study.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。
　　[2]“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。
　　[3]“从…中受益很多”。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。
　　[6]“加强社会责任感”。
　　[7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
　　[8]“平衡…之间的关系”。

1 outline   

n.大纲，轮廓，概要，要点；v.描画轮廓，描述要点

参考例句：

• Make an outline before trying to write a composition.写作文之前先写个提纲。
• Draw an outline before you fill in the details.先画个轮廓，再画细部。

2 practical   

adj.实际的，实践的；实用的，应用的；有实际经验的

参考例句：

• He is a practical person.他是位很讲实际的人。
• Your invention is clever,but not practical.你的发明很巧，但不实用。

3 alike   

adj.同样的，相像的；adv.一样地；同程度地　

参考例句：

• The twins are so alike that I can't tell which is which.这对双胞胎一模一样，我分辨不出谁是谁。
• All stories seemed dreadfully alike,no matter who told them.看来，不管谁讲，故事都是千篇一律的。

4 provided   

conj.假如，若是；adj.预备好的，由...供给的

参考例句：

• Provided it's fine we will have a pleasant holiday.如果天气良好，我们的假日将过得非常愉快。
• I will come provided that it's not raining tomorrow.如果明天不下雨，我就来。

5 campus   

n.大学校园，学校校园；大学　

参考例句：

• They spoke of the old days on the campus.他们谈起昔日的校园生活。
• The campus covers an area of twenty square kilometres.这个校园占地二十平方公里。

6 responsibility   

n.责任，职责

参考例句：

• The safety of the ship is the captain's responsibility.确保船的安全是船长的责任。
• The matter is outside my area of the responsibility.此事超出我的责任范围。