In the grand scheme of thngis you receive an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost us was first in your particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details And it couldn't be much more correct in this article. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did work. The text is really engaging which is probably the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily notice a jumps in reasoning you make, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas which in turn make the actual final result. For the moment I will subscribe to your point but hope in the future you actually connect the dots much better.